Wednesday, March 26, 2014

Thesis Statement (which will probably be changed at least six more times before my final draft)


The United States Government is taking action in censoring the Internet more, which limits the creativity of the online generation.
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2 comments:

  1. KentMarch 26, 2014 at 3:15 PM

    Rosalie - I'm very interested in this topic!!! Nice. My suggesting would be to rewrite the sentence to reduce the wordiness.

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